What do you think of my poem?
Water down the imagination.
Kill all of the creation.
Broadcast on the radiostation, “Here comes the Corporation Nation!”
Red stripes start the hype.
Please tell me you aren’t the type,
To support this Corporation Nation.
Strips of white that send you to fight,
For this Corporation Nation.
Blue sky with silver stars,
Represents all the scars,
Brought on by this Corporation Nation.
Enormous lines in shopping malls,
Movie stars that look like dolls,
Consumers responding to the calls,
Of the Corporation nation.
Children paid 12 cents an hour,
By the men that have the power,
To run this Corporation Nation.
Lets change that way things have become,
Let our voices be heard like the beat of a drum.
Stand up and shout,
And get the message out,
“WE MUST STOP THIS CORPORATION NATION!”
I like the White Stripes.
Your poem is provocative.
A good write.
