I’m entering this in a poetry conest… could you critique it for me?
Ella
She twirls and she whirls everywhere she goes Everyday she acts like there’s something she knows That we don’t, she is a princess She wanders the house in that Barbie dress She believes in dreams and magic Her magic wand is an old oak stick She searches for Tinker Bell She has many secrets to tell Her bed is a castle, the closet a new land She holds her dreams in the palm of her hand Every day is a fairy tale to her When you watch her you’re sure That dreams come true She once told me that they do She says Peter Pan took her to Neverland She said, “Take my hand And I’ll take you there” Suddenly I feel like I’m walking on air You look at her and she’s Cinderella But then you blink and she’s just Ella
Ella from Neverland, with Tinker on a shoulder, and dreams in her pockets….
Good one! If I had written this, I would have used the cute name ‘Ella’ much more…so many words ryhme and alliterate with that name! First, second, or third…remember…a win is a win!
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